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Monday, November 14

Repose

A space of leisure with peace
Where the soft pink bubbles tease
Relaxed my body and my soul
I'm tensed no more..
Rubbing skin with a soft gentle touch 
So nourishing and pure
I found a wonderland 
A fantasy of joy to explore
Leaving back the stress of day to day life
I'm blessed with moist shower 
Entering within me with an eternal satisfaction
Deploring out my dilemma 
I feel so secure!

This poem is written for the entry of 

Short Story Slam Week 14


15 comments:

Alpana Jaiswal said...

I always indulge in spas...and there is nothing more which makes me totally relaxed..good post.

Rimly said...

Oh to have a tub bath. It is out of this world!

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Hema Nimbekar said...

What a lovely poem....its true it really relaxed...even i loved the bubble and leisure shower bath....I feel so secure...

Mani said...

Aww!! Choo chweet!! Poochi..<3

Andy said...

Hello.
A little indulgence every now & then is good for the mind, body & soul.
Nice job, Simran dear!
Thanks for sharing.

Imaginary Dreams

JANU said...

So relaxing...vividly written.

Morning said...

this is lovely.

glad that you enjoyed the bath.

Shreya said...

Nicely written :)

The Orange Tree said...

feeling secure is a good thing.
smiles.

well done.

e.a.s. demers said...

Nice one! :-)

Rahul Bhatia said...

Truly relaxing! Lovely weave..

Punam said...

Ohh i knoww... nothing better than relaxing and let go of stress this way!
:)

sm said...

lovely poem
happy new year

melissa said...

I'd love to jump in the tub after reading this poem. There's nothing like treating myself like a princess on a Saturday ;) Bubbles... bubbles...

sowmya said...

just like a photo click; u made up with a different topic pick :) wonderful expression,simran :)
keep writing & smiling always!