Monday, November 14


A space of leisure with peace
Where the soft pink bubbles tease
Relaxed my body and my soul
I'm tensed no more..
Rubbing skin with a soft gentle touch 
So nourishing and pure
I found a wonderland 
A fantasy of joy to explore
Leaving back the stress of day to day life
I'm blessed with moist shower 
Entering within me with an eternal satisfaction
Deploring out my dilemma 
I feel so secure!

This poem is written for the entry of 

Short Story Slam Week 14


Alpana Jaiswal said...

I always indulge in spas...and there is nothing more which makes me totally relaxed..good post.

Rimly said...

Oh to have a tub bath. It is out of this world!

Hema Nimbekar said...

What a lovely poem....its true it really relaxed...even i loved the bubble and leisure shower bath....I feel so secure...

Mani said...

Aww!! Choo chweet!! Poochi..<3

Andy said...

A little indulgence every now & then is good for the mind, body & soul.
Nice job, Simran dear!
Thanks for sharing.

Imaginary Dreams

JANU said...

So relaxing...vividly written.

Morning said...

this is lovely.

glad that you enjoyed the bath.

Shreya said...

Nicely written :)

The Orange Tree said...

feeling secure is a good thing.

well done.

e.a.s. demers said...

Nice one! :-)

Rahul Bhatia said...

Truly relaxing! Lovely weave..

Punam said...

Ohh i knoww... nothing better than relaxing and let go of stress this way!

sm said...

lovely poem
happy new year

melissa said...

I'd love to jump in the tub after reading this poem. There's nothing like treating myself like a princess on a Saturday ;) Bubbles... bubbles...

sowmya said...

just like a photo click; u made up with a different topic pick :) wonderful expression,simran :)
keep writing & smiling always!