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Friday, June 17

Oh it's you..?


A fragrance that lingered my soul,
A fragrance that grasps my heart...
But still I don't know why it's capturing me through;
It's origin I don't know...
Maybe it's someone heart that glows its debris and flows...
It's wet soil or snow?
It's a fragment of sandal? Oh! Of course NO..
Searching through all around I wish, I could find it or propound..
My lingering steps hold me around and I found that soothing pleasure..
Oh Jasmine! It’s you :)
Your blooming blossoms make me feel awesome!!
I wish to breath within you..
I wish my breath lasts with in you.
p.s.- In my garden there are many jasmines and everyday when I wake up;I run towards my beautiful garden and smells that beautiful fragrance :)..It's so refreshing and pleasing!
Planting in a park


''There is no glory in star or blossom till looked upon by a loving eye; There is no fragrance in Jasmin breezes till breathed with joy as they wander by''. 

26 comments:

Geeta Singh said...

amazing girll amazing u r awesome :) great , lovelyy ..I liked every line of this poem ~_~

Simran said...

@Geets:
Wow! I'm so happy to see this beautiful comment! I was not knowing it's so beautiful as you said ! thank you so muchh :)

sHoNa said...

hey wow very refreshing n fresh...gud...
nice1

Fatima said...

Wow that was lovely...refreshing :)

Take Care.

JIM said...

I have read that our strongest sense is that of smell. I have been in a grassland after a heavy rain and can attest to the emotions it can open in us. I have now smelled a Jasmine Garden and the wonders it holds. Thank YOu

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Simran said...

@Shona:
Thank you :)

Simran said...

@Fatima:
Thank you , hoping this refreshing post refreshed you :D

Simran said...

@Fatima:
Thank you , hoping this refreshing post refreshed you :D

@jim
Hmmm,so you must have fallen with all your heart in jasmine's fragrance..It's so pleasing:)..
Thanks JIM ...

Someone is Special said...

right from the heart.. Awesome lines and my fav is "Your blooming blossoms make me feel awesome!!".. Awesome..

Someone is Special

David said...

Your words evoke lovely memories of my childhood...sniffing the heavenly scent of my mother's jasmine bushes. So fragant and appealing, the memory stays will me for hours...just like your poem will. Thanks for sharing!!

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IRFANUDDIN said...

hhmmm sniffing the flower is alwyas good n refreshing.....:)

and btw little angel at the bottom itself looking like a flower...God bless you Simran.

sulekkha said...

Sweet and fragrant poetry by a sweet girl, god bless

Simran said...

@SIS:
Glad that you liked it! thank you :)

Simran said...

@David:
I wish the same :)
Thanks

fantacy in practicality said...

i can see you as white as jasmine, i can smell the fragrance exquisite when i stroll with your thoughts in your garden.

Alpana Jaiswal said...

Beautiful line,Simran..and I love this place..it has a wonderful feel...A relationship is like a rose,
How long it lasts, no one knows;
Love can erase an awful past,
Love can be yours, you'll see at last;
To feel that love, it makes you sigh,
To have it leave, you'd rather die;
You hope you've found that special rose,
'Cause you love and care for the one you chose.

Simran said...

@Irfan:
That's so sweet of you to say this:)
Thank you :)

Simran said...

@Sulekkha:
And sweet comment by a sweet fragment personality:)..Thank you

Simran said...

@Sanchi :
That's so beautiful :)..
Thank you, Sanchi :)

Simran said...

@Alpana:
Beautiful lines..your presence makes me happy.I'm glad that you liked this place..here it's all about me :)..
I chose the one and it's you,Alps..
Love you..take care and keep smiling!

melissa said...

I haven't seen Jasmines and they definitely do not exist in our garden... but I love it just the same by the way you described it...

It actually symbolizes "amiability", "attachment" and "sensuality"... how beautiful :)...loved this...

Simran said...

@Dear one :
It symbolizes exactly the same as you've mentioned,Dear one :)..Thanks for loving it;)

Geeta Singh said...

smiling,,, blushing and feeling shyyyyyyyy >... M I right:D

Simran said...

@Geets:
Smiling and blushing..no shyyyy :P
LOL

Portia said...

Simran,please brush up your English!

Simran said...

@Portia:
I really need ...Thanks